Your 3 understandings are clear, but how are the two texts related?

Sure, you can always revise this one based on my feedback, which you can find below: Thesis: 19 points (D) -Your 3 understandings are clear, but how are the two texts related? Students must move beyond talking about what they both share. Support: 25 points (A) Organization: 13 points (F)

-These topic sentences illogically develop, as I expected each one to restate one of the 3 understandings you listed, but these were very unclear. Style / Grammar: 13 points (D)

-Missing page numbers. -Missing Works Cited page. Total: 70 (C) Overall, solid job. Thank you for your hard work. I appreciate your effort.

Hope this feedback helps. In the meantime, please let me know if you have any concerns or questions. Best, Professor Parmese.