Write a study that explains the significance of one’s success being influenced by both one’s internal and external perceptions. Our main source throughout fall semester was “ The outliers “ by Malcom Gladwell & we’ve also read others in our course too . The source “ Passing the Baton” was a outside source that we needed to find from our library that could also contribute to our thesis/topic . I don’t have a memory of what specific chapters i used but i did use “ Maritas bargain “ , “ Rice paddies & Math test” , The plane crashes chapter from the outliers to support my thesis , i did attach my outline so you maybe could take a look at it . I was trying to attach my previous essays so you could see the way i write but it would not let me . I do want the essay to stay within my tone of voice ( the parts you edit or add) because my teacher sort of know how i write . I also did add the comments she left on my ESSAY 4 outline , that may could help too . i’ve also added all the articles i’ve used too I believe that some errors i made was transition words , maybe not introducing certain quotes , citing etc im sure it’s more things . My essay just need a little bit of fixing up , not way too much , you could also fix things of your liking of what you prefer . My course is MLA FORMAT . We also have to do a work cited page in MLA FORMAT . I’ve also added some feed back that my peers put for my peer review .
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