I have attached the draft I created last week with the professor′s comments on things that needs to be improved. Please remember a draft is already completed. the paper just needs to be touched up. Using your Process Analysis Essay Draft from Week 6, you will review the draft at all levels: whole-essay, paragraph, sentence, word, and punctuation. You should focus on looking for ways to improve the quality of the essay for a reader with the following in mind: Overall essay organization (For example: Does the placement of your body paragraphs work well toward clarity for the reader, who might want to try the process?) Structure of each paragraph (Closely checking for and improving on your use of the standards for writing Introduction Paragraphs, Body Paragraphs, and Conclusion Paragraphs) Flow (Avoiding short, choppy sentences and adding transitions where they are needed at the start of paragraphs and sentences) Wording (Choosing a more accurate word, like a more appropriate transition, or replacing vague words like “things”) Grammar (Proofread many times, letting others proofread for you as well, and consider using the free version of Grammarly) APA formatting (Use your examples and follow those and the instructions closely) Successful assignments will do the following: Include all important parts of each of the 5 paragraphs, according to your lessons in Week 5 Explore and as demonstrated in the Sample 5-Paragraph Process Analysis Essay in APA Format. Follow a clear “topic + 3 main ideas” structure overall Use specific, granular, detailed examples to make each main idea very clear and vivid for a reader, as demonstrated in Week 5 Explore and in the Sample 5-Paragraph Process Analysis Essay in APA Format. Carefully apply principles of revision as demonstrated in Week 4 Explore and via the Revision Checklist for the Process Analysis Essay. Use full and proper APA formatting as demonstrated in Week 3 Explore and in the Sample 5-Paragraph Process Analysis Essay in APA Format. Use proper grammar. Reminders of APA formatting (also see and follow the Sample 5-Paragraph Process Analysis Essay in APA Format) 1-inch margins Double spacing throughout A proper APA font and size, such as 11-point Calibri, 11-point Arial, or 12-point Times New Roman. The Sample 5-Paragraph Process Analysis Essay in APA Format is written in 11-point Calibri. Title page formatted in APA style as shown in Week 3 Explore and in the Sample 5-Paragraph Process Analysis Essay in APA Format Page numbers formatted as described in Week 3 Explore and in the Sample 5-Paragraph Process Analysis Essay in APA Format. NO SOURCES!
